Thursday, November 5, 2015

Major Writing Assignment #2

Campus Involvement and Dedication to Studies
Ben Ahlers
University of Iowa



Abstract
            The topic of time management for college students is highly debated. Especially for freshman, this is the first time when there is not someone watching your every move to make sure that you get everything done that needs to be done. These students must manage their time effectively to allow them enough time throughout the day to successfully accomplish what needs to be done, which can be very difficult for many. To further test this topic, I conducted a survey consisting of 8 questions on an online survey website (surveymonkey.com). I asked a total of 66 college students from a variety of college campuses across the nation and examined their results on the survey to better understand how they spent their time. Students are involved in many activities throughout campus, and have to balance these with their sleep and studies to have a successful college life and experience.

Introduction
A major issue in the lives of college students is how they become involved on campus and still keep up with their studies. In college, students are involved in many activities (fraternities, sororities, sports, student organizations, etc.) in addition to having to go to class, study, and do homework. According to College Parent Central, “Being involved in the things happening at the college can bring tremendous benefits to your college student.  However, as with so many things during these college years, it is important that your student find balance” (College 1). But how do they do so much in such little time throughout the day and still be successful in school? In my research, I asked students from several universities multiple questions that gave me an idea of how this is possible.
The majority of students were involved in various activities in high school, whether it be sports, clubs, or service organizations. But once they transition to college, many more opportunities have risen to their attention. The study portrays these different opportunities that they have decided to take part in, but also shows how they have continued to stay dedicated to their studies along the way; successfully managing their time.
Time management can, simply put, determine the success that a student has during their time at college. According to the University of Wisconsin – Green Bay, “Effective time management is a skill most people need to make the most out of their personal and professional lives. To a college student, it can make the difference between a mediocre and a superior performance” (Green Bay 1). This study shows how college students have tackled the task of time management.

Methods
Participants: 55 men and 10 women participated in this study. All participants are current students at the collegiate level.
Data Sources: The data was compiled via surveymonkey.com (an online survey website). Participants are all college students from various schools across the nation (a large majority of which attend the University of Iowa).
Procedures: The participants answered the 8 question survey online through surveymonkey.com. The participants were asked various questions about their college life, involvement on campus, and commitment to their education. With these results, several graphs and charts were created to analyze the data based on gender, university, and hometown.


Results
            Although bias was intended to be removed from the study, it is possible that gender could have had an effect on the overall results of the survey. A large majority of the respondents were male (55, or 83.33%) and only a small portion were female (11, or 16.67%).

Figure 1: Students’ involvement in activities on campus
            A main point of the research was to discover what ways college students have become involved on campus. According to the research, 91% of the participants participate in at least 1 campus activity, with the average being slightly over 2 activities per participant. This exemplifies how the struggle of time management occurs; students become involved in many things (sometimes more than they can handle). With the wide variety of options available to the students (see Figure 2), there is a lot of time that needs to be divided amongst those that they choose to be involved in, which can prove to be difficult at times.


Figure 2: What activities are students involved in?
            This figure simply provides an extension of figure 1. By having this large variety of options, students must take into account the time that goes into the various activities before they choose to join one, because after all studies are most important and they are at college to receive an education.

Figure 3: How much time does a student spend studying per week?
            This chart looks at the other aspect of time management in college: education. Students must balance their time studying alongside their time in activities, as both are required for a healthy college lifestyle. As shown in the chart, some subjects require more studying than others (for example, science requires much more studying than foreign language). So depending on the class load that the student has created for themselves for that current semester, they could have a more difficult time making room for everything in one day.

Discussion
            This study has further explained the problem of time management on college campuses. Although balancing studying, going to class, and extracurricular activities can be difficult, it was made obvious to me that it can be done. On average, students participate in roughly 2 extracurricular activities, meaning that it is possible to be active on campus while still getting your studies done. Through figure 3, it was made obvious to me that studies are definitely still getting done while the students participate in their other activities, meaning that their time management is successful for the time being.
            Although the study went smoothly, some errors could have occurred. For example, I think it would have been beneficiary to eliminate the gender bias in my results. To do this, I could have reached out specifically to more female subjects and not as many male subjects. This would have allowed me to see if there was a difference in time management between male and female students on college campuses. Also, it would have been beneficiary to know how many credit hours the students were enrolled in for the current semester. This would allow me to see how much studying is required per hour of classes taken (seeing if those with less credit hours are involved in more activities outside of their studies).



Appendix
Survey Questions:
1.     What school do you currently attend?
a.     Open-response question
2.     What is your hometown and state?
a.     Open-response question
3.     What is your gender?
a.     Male
b.     Female
4.     What activities are you currently involved in on campus? (Choose all that apply)
a.     Fraternity/Sorority
b.     Intramural Sports
c.     School Sponsored Sport
d.     Music Group
e.     Working Class
f.      Charitable Organization
g.     Other (please specify)
                                               i.     Open-response option
5.     Are you involved in more, less, or the same amount of activities as you were in high school?
a.     More activities in college
b.     Less activities in college
c.     Equal amounts of activities in high school and college
6.     What type of classes are you currently taking? (Choose all that apply)
a.     Math
b.     Science
c.     History
d.     Business
e.     Foreign Language
f.      English
g.     Music/Dance
7.     How much time do you spend studying/doing homework for each subject per week?
a.     Math
                                               i.     <1 Hour
                                             ii.     1-2 Hours
                                           iii.     2-3 Hours
                                            iv.     3-4 Hours
                                             v.     5+ Hours
b.     Science
                                               i.     Same options as before
c.     History
                                               i.     Same options as before
d.     Business
                                               i.     Same options as before
e.     Foreign Language
                                               i.     Same options as before
f.      English
                                               i.     Same options as before
g.     Music/Dance
                                               i.     Same options as before
8.     How much sleep do you get on average per night?
a.     <4 Hours
b.     5 Hours
c.     6 Hours
d.     7 Hours
e.     8 Hours
f.      9+ Hours




References
Managing Time for Success in College. (n.d.). Retrieved November 5, 2015.
Survey Monkey. (n.d.). Retrieved 4 November 2015, from https://www.surveymonkey.com/summary/kKODK6b_2FP63L2UbkEOzknGxuWICcxP0tJ5I3S21qTCQ_3D 8 GAqTJbpRVjk_3D

Why You Should Encourage Your College Student to Get Involved on Campus. (2009, November 8). Retrieved November 5, 2015.

Monday, November 2, 2015

Methods for Writing Assignment #2

Participants: 55 men and 10 women participated in this study. All participants are current students at the collegiate level.

Procedures: The participants answered the 8 question survey online through surveymonkey.com.

Observations: The participants were asked various questions about their college life, involvement on campus, and commitment to their education. With these results, I created several graphs and charts to analyze the data based on gender, university, and hometown.

Introduction for Writing Assignment #2

A major issue in the lives of college students is how they become involved on campus and still keep up with their studies. In college, students are involved in many activities (fraternities, sororities, sports, student organizations, etc.) in addition to having to go to class, study, and do homework. But how do they do so much in such little time throughout the day and still be successful in school? In my research, I asked students from several universities multiple questions that gave me an idea of how this is possible.

Monday, October 26, 2015

Two Research Questions

1st Idea:
1.       Question
a.       Where do students spend their money during the week and on the weekends? Is the money spent more on school or social reasons? What purchases do students regret?
2.       Participants
a.        I will be asking people that attend the University of Iowa, but also those that I know from home that attend other universities. This will allow me to have a good variety of responses
3.       Conducting Research
a.       Where – I will be conducting my research from the University of Iowa in Iowa City, IA
b.      How – I will be using an online survey machine called survey monkey, which will allow me to receive their responses easily and efficiently
4.       Analyzing
a.       For starters, I will group the responders based on the university they attend. I will also create another group based on their hometown, to see if the trends are different based on these two factors
5.       Presentation of Data
a.       To represent my data, I will include various graphs, charts, and tables. These will show the trends that my data possesses based on the locations that I split the groups into

2nd Idea
1.       Question
a.       How many hours do you spend studying or doing class work per week? Is someone setting a requirement for you, or are you doing so on your own?
2.       Participants
a.       I will be asking both students that attend the University of Iowa and students that attend other collegiate level schools, to ensure that there is no bias incorporated in their responses
3.       Conducting Research
a.       Where – I will be conducting my research from the University of Iowa
b.      How – I will be using the online survey machine called survey monkey to make it very easy for my responders to give me an answer
4.       Analyzing:
a.       To start, I will observe the answers based on geographic location. First, I will divide them by the university they attend and then in another chart, I will split the responses up by their hometown
5.       Presentation of Data:

a.       To represent my data, I will include various graphs, charts, and tables. These will show the trends that my data possesses based on the locations that I split the groups into

Tuesday, October 6, 2015

Speech Outline

“The Finest in St. Louis”

This is the slogan for Ted Drewes, a local ice cream shop in St. Louis, Missouri. Through the use of various print and commercial advertisements, Ted Drewes draws very positive attention to their company and products. They use ethos to associate themselves with famous aspects of St. Louis and use pathos to bring offer a family feel to those seeing their advertisements.
In the following advertisements, you will see examples of how Ted Drewes sells its product to their intended audience using both ethos and pathos. The first example I will be showing is a common and very popular television commercial that airs on local channels (play video of the commercial). This is the main idea of what Ted Drewes stands for: family. One of their primary messages to their customers is that it is a very friendly, family based organization and this commercial is very evident of that. They use pathos here to strike the soft spot in a customer’s heart where their family lies. Family is the most important aspect of most people’s lives, so they are using a very successful strategy.

The second example of advertising is a print advertisement that expresses both ethos and pathos. They use bright colors in both their advertisement and products (cups that they serve their ice cream in) to give the customers a distinct image in their mind. When people think of yellow, they usually associate it with happy feelings. By using yellow, they give customers and those who see the advertisements a happy feeling, which is one of their main goals. They use ethos by linking their ice cream with the radio station known as “the voice of St. Louis”.  This gives the audience of the radio station the impression that Ted Drewes’ frozen custard is seen as the ice cream of St. Louis.

To enhance their products viability, Ted Drewes has extended their products to being sold and teamed up with the St. Louis Cardinals. By doing so, they use ethos to give their company a leg up in recognition on their competitors. They are advertised in the various ads at the ballpark and their ice cream can be found at various vendors throughout the stadium. They have also included their name on promotions given at the entrance to the stadium. Now, when people think of the St. Louis Cardinals Ted Drewes also comes to mind as they have developed a link between the two.

All in all, Ted Drewes is very effective in their form of advertisement. By using both ethos, they give their intended audience a strong association between their products and other well-renowned associations. By using pathos, they give their customers a happy, friendly idea of their company, which is very important and key to drawing in a large audience.


Advertisement is the main reason why Ted Drewes is successful, and it is very obvious how they do so.

Thursday, October 1, 2015

Speech Proposal

I chose to do my analysis on Joe Boccardi’s Ristorante, a local Italian restaurant in my hometown. I have eaten many times at Joe Boccardis’, so I am very familiar with the business itself. All around St. Louis and its surrounding suburbs you will find advertisements for Joe’s, whether it be in newspapers, magazines, billboards, or on television. I am interested in understanding further how the advertisements can make a local company like Joe Boccardi’s seem so big.
I have chosen to analyze a print article from the St. Louis Post Dispatch (a local newspaper). It shows a claim that Joe’s commonly makes and displays their main advertisement strategy of using St. Louis monuments to back up their claim. The common claim that is used says “St. Louis’ Favorite Pizza”, which in this case is backed up by a picture of the St. Louis Arch in the background. The monuments really do a good job of solidifying the claim they make, which makes the advertisement very successful.

As portrayed in this advertisement and many others that Joe Boccardi’s produces, the main rhetorical strategy is pathos. By including the various St. Louis monuments, they are inducing the pride that many residents have for their city, tying their products with that pride. They will also commonly include pictures of their pizza, pasta, or other items to induce hunger into those that are reading the advertisement, making them more inclined to stop in and visit the restaurant.